Fluorescence

I personally did not care for the poems  in Fluorescence. Many of them were very vague, which I know poems are supposed to be, but they seemed almost too vague. There also wasn't as much word play as you usually see in poetry which I feel sets poetry apart from other forms of writing. Because of this while I was reading it I didn't feel like I was reading a book of poems, more like a very unorganized book. But, maybe thats the way the author intended it to be because of the connections between the poems.